Thursday 20 August 2009

A couple of Haiku's

As I said in my last post I have written a few Haiku's in the last week. Two I will be sending of to the Writing Magazine, but here are two that didn't make the shortlist:

Newborn in the Sun.
Leaves fall and die as he cries.
Burnt by nature’s gift.


Black and white keys. Played
in a trance. We do not speak.
Thoughts echo the sound.

Joanne Borrill
August 2009

1 comment:

Area 17 said...

I'm glad you like haiku! ;-)

Here are the results of the 2nd With Words haiku competition, with commentary.

all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition Results
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